poem:there must be a wonderful day

[karan]

hi folks,
There must be a wonderful day somewhere
In a place filled with love and a great need to care
A place where the burdens of conflict are lifted
Where love is a skill and all lovers are gifted.
Where daily are spoken the words that support
And every mistake is not met with retort
A place where the land has not soaked up the blood
Where honor and truth are not cast in the mud.
A place where the children are not left alone
Where Sisters and Brothers may come to atone
Where homeless and helpless don’t cower in fright
Where the hearts and the minds of the world can unite.

[vikaskapoor]

hi karan,
this is a great poem karan , keep it up
god bles you.

regards
vikas kapoor

[solankyno1]

Well Done Karan.
The poem and its words are very good. I hope these lines will be true any day.

[rohin]

Great Poem !!!!!!


But Wondering For Whom It Has Been Dedicated To ??????????????
Any Gueses ??????????????????????????

[Pranav]

hi karan
a wanderfull poem karan .here atleast our minds are united.

well rohin what about u? u continue your poems.

Pranav

[Kaleem Ahmed]

hello Karan

you have posted a very good poem. It is full of hope and this is what we some times loose in our life especially we face poverty, illness or difficulties like that. Keep sending such stuff..

[ariefali]

Hey Karan

Its a nice poem. Its full of desire - hope we all work towards such a place - Good one . . . Keep it up . . . CHEERS !!!!!!